Thursday, December 6, 2012

Sophomores - Final Essay Prompt


Sophomores, this is your final essay prompt. Please be prepared and work on this essay before your final.

Lord of the Flies Prompt for the Final Essay

Persuasive Essay Analysis

You are to compose a 5 paragraph essay with 3 MLA quotes to cite from the text. Please be conscious of the six traits or writing: organization, sentence fluency, voice, ideas and content, conventions, and word choice.
Again, please check your essay for conventions and correct grammar usage. Also be sure to use third person and avoid generalizations. If you make a point, please be sure to concisely support it.

Essay Prompt: According to William Golding, is evil intrinsic or extrinsic to humans?  How does he show this?  Did he convince you?  Why or why not?

First Paragraph: Introduction
Second, Third, Fourth Paragraphs: Body Paragraphs
Fifth Paragraph: Conclusion
Body Paragraph Formula:
Sentence 1: Topic sentence
Sentence 2: MLA Quote
Sentence 3 and 4: Support your quote
Sentence 5: Conclusion sentence that connects to the paragraph’s next sentence

Juniors - Final Essay Prompt


You have two weeks to prepare for the final. There should be no excuse for failing this exam. Although you may not use The Crucible for the exam, you may use your study guide as a reference.

The Crucible Prompt for the Final Essay
Character Analysis

You are to compose a 5 paragraph essay with 3 MLA quotes to cite from the text. Please be conscious of the six traits or writing: organization, sentence fluency, voice, ideas and content, conventions, and word choice.

Again, please check your essay for conventions and correct grammar usage. Also be sure to use third person and avoid generalizations. If you make a point, please be sure to concisely support it.

Essay Prompt: Choose of the following characters in The Crucible. Discuss their moral and virtuosic growth or decline throughout the play and how it affected another character in the list below.

Abigail Williams
John Proctor
Elizabeth Proctor
Reverend John Hale
Reverend Parris
Deputy Governor Danforth

Senior Study Guide, Comprehension Test, and Final Essay


Seniors, you will have your Angela's Ashes comprehension test on Monday, December 10. This study guide is also due on that day. The comprehension test is no mystery--if you complete and answer these questions then you will do well on the exam.
1.       What is the name of the school teacher who inspired Frank? In what ways does this teacher inspire him?
2.      What does Frank think will happen when he goes to America? Why is this his ultimate desire? What drives Frank to America?
3.      What is the relationship between Malachy (the brother) and Frank? What examples from the text support your beliefs on this?
4.      How does Frank’s father’s abandonment shape teenage Frank in Ireland? In what ways does it have long term effects?
5.      Why does Angela move in with Lamen?
6.      What is the symbolism of The Irish Oak? What is The Irish Oak? Explain.
7.      Why did McCourt end the book with ‘Tis?
8.      What does the role of guilt play through the novel? Give three instances.
9.      How is Ireland different than American in the 1930s – 1940s? Explain the economic culture.
10.   Why is this book is titled Angela’s Ashes?
11.   Why do you think McCourt offered to discuss such personal instances about his life in this memoir? Give examples of the text to support your point.
12.   What do you think the human experience means?
Seniors, your final essay prompt was handed out on Thursday, December 6. You have two weeks to work on your final. There is no excuse to fail this final--you should be over-prepared!

Let me know if you have any questions.

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Best of luck to all of you during this study week!

Ms. Tomasik

Wednesday, November 7, 2012

Juniors: The Crucible Text

This week you were to finish Act I of the The Crucible in class. If you did not check out a copy in class, please finish Act I along with your Study Guide Questions (there are 23 of them) in complete sentences.

You will have a quiz on Act I on Tuesday, November 13. To access a copy of The Crucible please click the following link: http://www.scribd.com/doc/21067412/The-Crucible-Text


Tuesday, October 23, 2012

Arizona PBS Nerd Walk

On Saturday, Oct. 27 at 9:00 AM before the ASU Homecoming game, we will meet at the Tempe ASU campus for the Arizona PBS Nerd Walk. Please be sure to sign up online at http://www.azpbs.org/nerd/ for more information. And most importantly, to sign up for your FREE t-shirt!

See you there!

:)

Ms. Tomasik

P.S., This is completely voluntary for students who want to strut their nerdness.

Sunday, October 21, 2012

Quarter 2 Vocabulary

Can't believe Quarter 2 is already here! 

Grades for Quarter 1 are officially posted. Students, I will return your Quarter 1 vocabulary finals tomorrow in class. It has your final Q1 grade circled at the top of the page.

New vocabulary is posted under each grade level. Students, please remember that you are expected to know the part of speech from here on out. Remember: Context clue homework is due every Monday night!

This quarter, we focus on our class novels and independent reading projects. Let me know if you have any questions!

Ms. Tomasik


Wednesday, October 17, 2012

College Brochure Project

Juniors and Seniors!

Mrs. McCoy reviewed the brochure project due on Monday, October 22nd. If you lose your notes (get organized!) then you may reference the following to help guide you on your brochure creation:


College Brochure Project

Due Monday, October 22nd

100 points – Homework Grade for Project
Worth more than quiz grades!

You may use any creative format to create the brochure. It doesn't have to be typed on the computer. I am copying the best ones to use as references in other classes. Please take your time with this. Effort and research is 10 points!
  • What is the main college that you’d like to attend? +5
  • What is the application deadline? +5
  • What is the application fee? (In-state AND out-of-state!) +5
  • What SAT/ACT scores do you need in order to be accepted? +5
  • How much does it cost to attend the school per year? In-state AND out-of-state!  +5
  • What is 1 scholarship that you found? Tell us about it. What are the requirements? What’s the scholarship deadline? What makes it such a perfect fit for you? +20 
  • What are you planning to study? (Major) Why? What makes you interested with it? What do you want to do with it? +5
  • What are some main attractions around the school? (Art museums, Empire State Building, Biggest Ball of Yarn?) +5
  • Why is this college for you? +5
  • What is 1 fun fact about the college? +5
  • Brochure pictures of campus and city +10
  • Effort and obvious research (2 links) + 10
  • Oral presentation +15



Can't wait to check out the projects for this Monday!

Tuesday, October 2, 2012

End of Quarter 1 Announcements: PSAT Prep and Vocab Test

Parents and Students,

The final quarter test (which will always be the cumulative vocabulary test) is now moved to Thursday, October 4th for the sake of PSAT testing for sophomores and juniors. If you need to get your grade's vocabulary words, click on your grade level to the left of the navigation bar. I suggest that you use the quizlet.com app to help prepare you for your vocabulary test. You need to have your in-class flash cards by Wednesday, October 5th. The test will evaluate your knowledge on context clues and correct spelling.

For more information about the PSATs, please browse through the collegeboard.org website. Students have prepared for the basics of the test, such as reviewing critical reading, math, and writing skills. In English class, students will take a timed practice test before the PSATs for the critical reading and writing skills portion of the test. These sections will be graded in class. However, the math section will be given to students at their own discretion. It is highly recommended that students take the math portions over fall break. In order to time yourself, here is a link to the countdown clock used in class.

For fall break, sophomores and juniors are expected to take another take-home prep PSAT test. Seniors are to read a short story pertaining to their Irish Literature unit with discussion questions.

Finally, Quarter 1 at ACAA officially ends on October 19th. However, I am ending my quarter units this Thursday with the quarter end final grades in PowerSchool by Sunday, October 7th. If you have any questions, please e-mail me.

Final grades BEFORE the Quarter 1 break will be posted in my classroom on Thursday, October 4th.

Good luck on your studies, and I hope everyone has a relaxing fall break!!!

Ms. Tomasik

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Thursday, September 13, 2012

Love Letter Edit for Reference

For folks who need a bit of reference, here's a polite and semi-edited version of the grammatically horrific, thoroughly obsessive love letter.

All students must re-write the letter to Chris from the perspective of the girl. Make your argument eloquently.  I am grading for conventions and organization according to the six traits rubric handed out on Wednesday.

Weekend Homework:
You are going to rewrite this letter from the perspective of the forlorn young girl whose heart was so blatantly shattered. Write a letter to Chris using the rules of grammar to illustrate the argument that, well, you don’t want to talk to him anymore. Be sure to follow the six traits of writing using the rubric attached.


Name: ____________________                                                         Period: ________
Love Letter Proofing
Directions: Use a red pen to make proofing marks on this paper. Only correct this paper for proofing marks.

Dear Loser,[Chris]~~~~!!!!
I thought you liked me you said it yourself I hate you .people only say you asked me out because you needed a date for the dance and that after the dance you would dump me well guess what bastert i dumped you cause you were thinking that I cheated on you i didn’t so like idiots that you guys are and so smart that you are you called me a slut.i hung up on you cause you tol me it on the phone because i guess you werent man enough to tell me it in my face!i hate you and also guess what my mother hates you to that she the one who put me to do this ,you come to breakfast every morning and I aint stupid you try to sit next to me and my lil bro who only 7YRS old hates you to and dont even know what you did and is always blocking your chair haha!I went out with another boy after you and after we were over you an idiot dated you even tried to ask me out again i didnt break up with him for you OK! I hate you ive always hated you spreading to everyone that I cheated on you when you just got jealouse that i used to talk to your friends to your so jealouse you automatically think i like them well guess maybe I do maybe i do maybe I dont gotta problem you aint my boyfriend anymore I dont  have to tell you who I like or who iam thinking of going out with its none of your buisness got that to you loser!Ihate you and I know you still like me but i dont like you i dont care what you stupid friends say you make me touch your hands for stupid reasons u accidentally say you hugged me I will never like you again I HATE YOU I HATE YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THIS DAMN WORLDDDDDDDDDDDD id rather date a spider or rat den u ur soooo ugly and fat!!!!!!!!!!!!! And then saying that I looooooooooved you pleassssse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU

Well bi i have more things to do right than then remember YOU

Answer these questions when finished:
1.      What was the most common error that you came across when editing?

2.      What is the main point of her message?

3.      How is her letter organized? (Beginning, body, conclusion.)




Video Interviews from Junior English



We had some TERRIFIC interviews in class last week when juniors finished their summer reading project with a self-interview to get into The Real World: Junior English. Other students made posters, acted in class, and we all had an all-around great time. Check it out!

Juniors! You should also know that grades are updated as a test grade for your self-interview project.

Friday, September 7, 2012

Discussion Prompts for Participation Credit

**There is now a link on the left hand side of the page to access the discussion prompts.

Please complete respond to any of the following discussion prompts in five complete sentences as associated with your grade level. Be sure to include your first name with your the initial of your last name along with the date you are attempting to make up for participation. These prompts will change every month.

For example:

Conan O.
Period 2
Grade 10

The loss of print will have a devastating consequence on...

Here are the following prompts for the month of September:

Grade 12: The invention of the Gutenberg press increased the population by half only a few centuries ago. We began communicating with our fingers in the 1950s with the invention of the computer only 60 years ago. We now discover more than 80% of information with the Internet which became popular only a little more than 20 years ago. Today we communicate with our phones via our thumbs.

With the quick rate of communication growing today, what do you believe the world will be like in 50 years in regards to the way society socializes? How will this have an impact on your life, the English class, and the world around us?

Grade 11: Do you think grammar and conventions are necessary to teach in English class? With texting being so popular and being injected into everyday colloquialisms, is it even necessary? Is there such a thing as "proper grammar?" How does having "proper grammar" affect potential work opportunities? Explain your answer.

Grade 10: Do you believe that the transition of printed documents to online sources (laptops, tablets, smartphones) is helpful or hurtful to society? Explain your answer.

Vocabulary #4

Vocabulary 4 is posted under each grade's page. Also, on Monday you will have the Vocabulary #3 quizzes.

All grades are currently updated on PowerSchool. Please come see me before or after school if you have any questions regarding your grades. Progress reports go out today!

Also, there is a new discussion page post for students who need to make up their participation via absence or losing points (due to chewing gum, for example) in class. Leave a comment and I will give you credit.

Have a relaxing and safe weekend!

Tuesday, August 28, 2012

Monday, August 20, 2012

Vocabulary is posted under the grade's appropriate page. We are now on Vocabulary #2 for this week.

Tuesday, August 14, 2012

Summer Reading

Hey folks! Sorry to Zach and Brooklyn who were looking for the summer reading assignments last night. I had written the post, but did apparently not "publish" it. Supposedly, a huge difference in Bloggingland.

The first thing that I want to reiterate is this: don't sweat. The assignments will be officially due Thursday, October 4th. Now, don't think that you can't do any work until then because it WILL come sneaking up and bombard if you wait last minute. The reason that I have made this decision to postpone the assignment is because many new students have still not read the summer reading material; they don't have a clue on how to navigate the assignment. This Thursday, my lecture and lesson focus will be on the format of the summer reading assignments. (For example, if you are clueless as to what anaphora is, I'm going to clear that up!)

Finally, your summer reading (the book) needs to be read by Monday, August 20th. We will spend the rest of the month in discussion and lectures on these texts. Here they are:

Sophomores: The Secret Life of Bees by Sue Kidd Monk
Juniors: A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius by Dave Eggers
Seniors: The Road by Cormac McCarthy

Here are the summer reading assignments:

10th Grade: You need to see me because you are completing a dialectical journal. I have examples in class.


English 11 Reading Adventure! – Modern Nonfiction 
You are assigned to read A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius by Dave Eggers this summer. On the first day of school, you are expected to have a completed assignment as your first grade of the school semester.
    1. You need to choose 2 different terms from each of the following sections:
      1. Sentence/Grammar
      2. Figurative Language
      3. Literary Terms/Devices

Now let’s do the math: 2 x 3 = 6. Therefore, six terms will be expected.


HINT: It’s easier to look for the terms as you read than it is to read the book and then go back and search for them. Also, choose terms you think you understand so you can identify the example as you see them. You will be explaining the terms in written form and orally.


    1. As you read your book, write down the passage using the term from the required list. Then explain how the passage is an example of the term you are choosing to discuss. Be sure to cite your passage.
    2. For your literary response, you are expected to respond to a certain section in the book in three paragraphs. Sentences must be 7 sentences long and in complete sentences.
    3. Be prepared to complete a book talk during the first week of school. You will be discussing whether or not you liked the book and why, if it is worthy or recommending to others, and explaining the passages you chose illustrating the various terms you identified.

When you finish reading your book and you complete your assignment, it should look similar to the format on the back of this page.


    1. Sentence/Grammar
      1. Diction
      2. Anastrophe
      3. Anaphora
    2. Figurative Language
      1. Allegory
      2. Hyperbole
      3. Imagery
    3. Literary Terms/Devices
      1. Prose
      2. Foible
      3. Paradox


    1. Literary Response
Examine the fake obituaries Dave and his fellow editors run in the Might magazine. 
1) What comment is the magazine trying to make by running fake obituaries?
2) Why do the fake obituaries backfire so badly?
3) How do the fake obituaries express the book's theme of death and how people react to it?


Meghan Grabel
Ms. Tomasik
English 11
August 6, 2012
Summer Reading Assignment

Title: A Heartbreaking Work of Staggering Genius
Author: Dave Eggers

    1. Sentence/Grammar Menu
      1. Anaphora -  “She is a vase, a doll. A giant vase. A giant fruit. A prize-winning vegetable” (32).
    Anaphora is used as a repetitive term used in the beginning of a sentence. As each use of the anaphora fragments progresses, so does the author’s mindset about his mother's cancer. The mother is described as “a doll” – childlike and delicate. Next, she is “a giant vase” where the description the vase takes shape of a body – a “giant” one due to the cancer’s growth. As the repetition continues, the reader quickly realizes that the mother’s mind is also slowly disintegrating with the cancer; she is a” vegetable,” someone whom Eggers treasures and considers “prize-winning.”

    1. Figurative Language
    1. Imagery – “Huddled together in the lobby, we were sheepish and apologetic, trying to keep things breezy. My mom, wearing a flower-print dress (it was the best thing she had in which she could conceal her intravenous apparatus), tried to stand and receive the comer, but she soon had to sit, grinning up at everyone, hello hello, thank you thank you, how are you?” (33).

    1. Literary Terms/Devices Section
      1. Prose – “‘I didn’t take anything,’ he says, chuckling, amused by me. ‘Don’t sweat it. Don’t worry,’ he says, with what seems to be exaggerated drunkenness” (263).

    1. Literary Response  - Please be sure to explain your paragraphs with 7 sentences/question.
*Remember, this is only an example. This example only has 1 term cited and explained: Anaphora. You need 6 terms cited and explained along with 6 paragraphs for your literary response. (Two paragraphs for every question.)

If you have any questions, please e-mail me at brighid.tomasik@edkey.org. Happy reading!


English 12 Reading Adventure! – Modern Fiction 
You are assigned to read The Road by Cormac McCarthy this summer. On the first day of school, you are expected to have a completed assignment as your first grade of the school semester.
Persuasive Essay
    1. Your essay must include a 3-pronged thesis as the last sentence of your concluding paragraph
    2. Your essay must include 6 quotations  from the book to support your perspective
    3. Your essay must include MLA citations to cite the quotes
Yeah, but stories are supposed to be happy.
    They dont have to be.
    You always tell happy stories.
    You dont have any happy ones?
    They’re more like real life.
    But my stories are not.
    Your stories are not. No.
    The man watched him. Real life is pretty bad?” (McCarthy 268).
    Please refer to http://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/747/2/ for a list of correct citations. Also remember that even if you may not directly quote the book, pulling any examples from the text -- such as describing a scene – is still considered a citation – a fact. Cite it.
Your essay must include a Works Cited page citing The Road and one other supporting text
    1. Your essay must be 8 paragraphs (2 paragraphs to support each prong; 3 prongs/topics = 6 paragraphs + 1 introduction paragraph and 1 concluding paragraph)
    2. Your essay must be Times New Roman, 12-point font, double spaced with indentations for every paragraph, page numbers on the top right hand of every page with your name (Tomasik 1)
    1. Your essay must include a compelling title that supports your thesis
    2. Your essay must be written with informal third person perspective
i.e., McCarthy further initiates his point that life is bleak by having the man by abandon the woman, the boy’s mother, to die alone despite the couple’s initial qualms about the world’s current situation (45).


Essay Prompt for Persuasive Essay:
Does The Road support a positive and uplifting view of humanity, or one of darkness and pessimism?

Remember that everything stated in your essay is an opinion – your opinion. Therefore, comments such as “I believe that…” are moot. Be comfortable with stating your stance without placing it into first person perspective. We will learn how to change third person perspective (this paper) to first person perspective (oral presentations) during mock debates.
Book Talk
Be prepared to complete a book talk during the first week of school. You will be discussing whether or not you liked the book and why and if it is worthy or recommending to others.
Mock Debates
The mock debates will be executed throughout the second week of school grouping students from differing perspectives as supported in their essay.

Basic Example of How You Should Format and Compose Your Paper:
    Grabel 1

Meghan Grabel
Ms. Tomasik
English 12
2012 August 6

Dont Go There: McCormick’s Detached Perspective Delivers an Inspiring Outcome

Paragraph 1:   Build up to your thesis; introduce the book and your stance.
    Last sentence is your 3-pronged thesis.
Paragraph s 2 and 3:  Support the first prong in your thesis.
    Topic sentence (prong 1) is the first sentence in paragraph 2; introduce paragraph 3 with direct quotation in book to support your topic sentence for paragraph 2.
Paragraphs 4 and 5:  Support the second prong in your thesis.
    Topic sentence (prong 2) is the first sentence in paragraph 4; introduce paragraph 5 with direct quotation in book to support your topic sentence for paragraph 4.
Paragraphs 6 and 7:  Support the third prong in your thesis.
    Topic sentence (prong 3) is the first sentence in paragraph 6; introduce paragraph 7 with direct quotation in book to support your topic sentence for paragraph 6.
Paragraph 8:   Restate your 3-pronged thesis without being repetitive.
    Conclude your thoughts in this paragraph.

Grading: I am grading on if you follow all directions (a – i in section I, Persuasive Essay above), the formatting of your paragraphs correctly, and the interpretation of your paper. This paper should be roughly 4 pages double-spaced. E-mail if you have any questions: brighid.tomasik@edkey.org
 

Monday, July 30, 2012

Welcome to English!

This blog is used as a resource for students and parents to remain updated on the happenings in English class. In the links to your left, there is a "Check It Out, Yo!" section that pertains to each grade with weekly updates. I will update this blog every Friday with the vocabulary and brief skeleton of what curriculum students will be preparing for the upcoming week.

There are also literary term reference guides found under each grade's link. I will pass out a hard copy of these terms the second week of class that you will never lose and place in the "Notes" section of your English notebook. You will thoroughly understand and apply your grade's term by the end of the 2012-2013 school year! Study them online at quizlet.com every chance you get.

If you have any questions, please feel free to contact me via e-mail at brighid.tomasik@edkey.org. I will answer any and all questions within 24 hours of the school week. If you'd like to make an appointment with me, please contact Anne at the front desk and she will set something up. Also, feel free to leave a comment on any of the blog posts. I think that's a fantastic way to communicate; however, a fool proof way is to e-mail me with any of your questions, comments, or concerns.

Finally, if you'd like to know a little bit more about my background in English and teaching, go ahead and click the "About Ms. Tomasik" link to your left. I am ridiculously passionate about writing, reading, philosophy, and being creative in general. I seriously cannot wait to meet everyone and get talking about literature, philosophy, and how they play into our everyday lives.

Here's to a fantastic upcoming school year! Can't wait to get to know you all.