All students must re-write the letter to Chris from the perspective of the girl. Make your argument eloquently. I am grading for conventions and organization according to the six traits rubric handed out on Wednesday.
Weekend Homework:
You are going to rewrite this letter from the perspective of the forlorn young girl whose heart was so blatantly shattered. Write a letter to Chris using the rules of grammar to illustrate the argument that, well, you don’t want to talk to him anymore. Be sure to follow the six traits of writing using the rubric attached.
Name: ____________________ Period:
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Love Letter Proofing
Directions:
Use a red pen to make proofing marks on this paper. Only correct this paper for
proofing marks.
Dear Loser,[Chris]~~~~!!!!
I thought you liked me you said it
yourself I hate you .people only say you asked me out because you needed a date
for the dance and that after the dance you would dump me well guess what
bastert i dumped you cause you were thinking that I cheated on you i didn’t so
like idiots that you guys are and so smart that you are you called me a slut.i
hung up on you cause you tol me it on the phone because i guess you werent man
enough to tell me it in my face!i hate you and also guess what my mother hates
you to that she the one who put me to do this ,you come to breakfast every
morning and I aint stupid you try to sit next to me and my lil bro who only
7YRS old hates you to and dont even know what you did and is always blocking
your chair haha!I went out with another boy after you and after we were over
you an idiot dated you even tried to ask me out again i didnt break up with him
for you OK! I hate you ive always hated you spreading to everyone that I
cheated on you when you just got jealouse that i used to talk to your friends
to your so jealouse you automatically think i like them well guess maybe I do
maybe i do maybe I dont gotta problem you aint my boyfriend anymore I dont have to tell you who I like or who iam
thinking of going out with its none of your buisness got that to you
loser!Ihate you and I know you still like me but i dont like you i dont care
what you stupid friends say you make me touch your hands for stupid reasons u
accidentally say you hugged me I will never like you again I HATE YOU I HATE
YOU MORE THAN ANYTHING IN THIS DAMN WORLDDDDDDDDDDDD id rather date a spider or
rat den u ur soooo ugly and fat!!!!!!!!!!!!! And then saying that I
looooooooooved you pleassssse!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE YOOOOOOOOOOOOOOU
Well bi i have
more things to do right than then remember YOU
Answer
these questions when finished:
1.
What
was the most common error that you came across when editing?
2.
What
is the main point of her message?
3.
How
is her letter organized? (Beginning, body, conclusion.)
